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May 13th, 2008 at 11:00 am

The Question and the Reply

Just about a month, I confessed my feelings to a girl. Although not directly but I was happy she got the message. However, things were complicated as mentioned in this poem. Although after the fog had clear, I had not really officially asked her the question yet.

This can be considered a continuation of the poem previously written. :)

Deary, I’ve been wondering.
Will I still be dreaming.
You by my side and we’re hugging.
Be comfortable, be joyful, be happy.
My heart beats like in a hurry.
Girlfriend I wish you are to me.

Her reply >>>

Deary, you are the one shine
I mentioned before time
Do is what I have for thee

Deary don’t give up on me
I will always be there for thee
Love and cherish your kisses
You have melt me to cheeses… :P

I had been waiting for a reply with my heart thumping hard. My Reply >>>

Deary,
You have made me worry,
made my heart beat in a hurry.
The faces you made when you made me wait
Waiting for you to decide our fate

Worth the time I’ve wait with mind blurry
It was a simple yet wonderful poetry
I was touched and very happy
Am I stupid to be so worried?
Happy after your reply I see.

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    Good on you man. Your creativity is amazing. =)

    khensthoth on May 23rd, 2008

 

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